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Same Song, Same Refrain.

The days blur together, and I hold back my tears,
The hours never-ending, as memories stoke the fires of my fears.
Why won't your face go away? Is it something I do on my own?
I keep thinking that I've solved this, but I guess it was a temporary loan.

Now I want the tears to come, but still, my eyes are dry...
It seems I was born to be miserable, though I'd thought I was born to fly.
Everyone seems to think I'll do great things, but how can I do anything,
When my heart is in constant pain, and I'm on your puppet strings?

It hurts, oh god, it hurts so bad, I can't even begin to explain,
I'm sorry I'm always singing the same song, the same refrain.
But it's all I know anymore, it's all I come back to,
The day I was raped by you.

uhm, raw emotion. Needed to get it out. no crits.

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  • sgking123 silver member
    November 8
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    wow

    teras that would not come and fears that compound...this was an intense poem and I loved its structure,,neat three stanzas.Thanks for sharing.Guess you may like to visit me and comemnt.

  • sgking123 silver member
    November 6
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    wow

    ache and pain was so intense...loved it all the ay......i also strew a lotta pain in mine poem....i invite you to check latest three


  • Hydrogen
    October 18

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    Amazin'

    Hey, I really liked this poem. I like how words are filled with sadness and sorrow. It gives a very clear message and the title is kindda creative. The last part is my fave. Am sorry u been throu alot, hope things work out better for u.