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Truly, You Are a Stranger

once we tangled 'tween the sheets
caught in lovers embrace
passion flowing through every fiber

But thats the past,
you left me,
broken and lonely

Now you are with someone new
My own sister, caught you,
like a spider in a web

You act like you don't know me,
and truly, you are a stranger,
gone, different, and indifferent to me

More so, you wish I didn't exist
so in comfort you could love her,
without guilt at every meet

I wish you nothing but goodness
happiness and love
Truth is, I'm glad you're gone.

Author notes

should really be "an Ode to Kyle" This is all true. My ex left me, and is now dating my sister!!!! However, I've met someone knew. its nice to have something to draw inspiration from.

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  • Princess-nee
    October 25, 2009
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    Quite a different poem.Thanks for the entry,Best of luck ^^


  • XxJapanesexXxVampxX silver member
    October 14, 2009
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    this is a truly sad poem, i simpithize with your peice, although i am happy that you found someone else