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Love and God and Us

call to me the future,
bring me hither
with my darling, my lover...

lover.....lover.....

Faith giving strength to us,
God lighting our loves path
with no thought but our own....

own....own....

Soon you will be called
I already know it
for your Lord to serve....

Serve....serve....

After or before,
neither can I tell
our love combined with a ring....

ring...ring....

happiness ensuing,
combining our lives
going forth together...

together....together....

And when we have children,
and then are old and grey,
still, we will love...

love...love...

Author notes

I really suck at anything song-like....my dad thinks that if you can write a poem, you can write a song....and I can't. anywho, this is just whatever you wish to make of it. Its about me and my boyfriend Devin....who I love very dearly, and who turned 20 yesterday, (happy birthday sugar). He wants to go to seminary after college. actually its basically definite.

and I want to marry him and have children with him. after college of course.

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Comments


  • workingharleylady
    October 28, 2009
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    beautiful

    truly a song in the making. Quite lovely
    warmly, chrissy


  • Carly Pop gold member
    October 16, 2009
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    beautiful

    beautiful amazing work! You have quite alot of talent! Thank you for your entry, good luck to you in the contest