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Wannabe Fools!

The divinity of self
Is of essential potential
….so they say…..
The inner most cravings of my mind
A protest against opinionated fools
That professes the truth of the written word!

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  • sgking123 gold member
    October 24

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    wow

    yu seem t have been a victim of instigation and opinionated individuals wh led you astray to meet their own objectives,.....and thus the inner most desire. I like this terse message..and how are you doing now.......stlll open to them or largely inure. Thanks for entering

  • I like your point of view. This is a great little poem that packs a punch.

    Mike