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Rip My Heart To Pieces

Rip my heart to pieces
Its time for you to go
How much pain you caused me
You'll probably never know
You thought it was something else
But no, it was this
It all started so innocent
It all started with a kiss
Passion growing stronger
Likeness turning into more
When you make you desicion
Just think of me before
Think of how I'll feel
Think of what I'll do
If you still want to do it
Then you should go through

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  • Seraph Avalon
    November 7

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    This is very good. It reminds me of how I feel about my bf.. I just don't feel like I can control how I feel compared to how he feels... I wish for so much more. Great work!


  • Britty-16
    October 17
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    I really like this. I can relate alot. Keep writing. Id love to hear more from you in the future.