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I'd like to die... (when you push inside)

My hands graze your satin skin,
as I take you in.

Ignite me..Dont fight me..

Sweet like honey dew,
drip onto me..
as I do you.

Promise me that you will never fail to excite me,
keep it kinky and slinky as...

my provacative lingerie.

The sky is the vibrant color of our indecentcy...
I don't care...
My cravings for you, would provoke me...
Anywhere.

Your hair, between my fingers..
Is what I need,
Entangled in your passion,
I suck your lips.

Touching you;
my body dancing seductively with your...
Fingertips.

Although my body explodes with happiness,
when you push inside,
the sensation is so overwhelming,
I'd like to die..

'Seduce me......spoil me....give me the ultimate fantasy'

No other has had this affect on me,
your sustanence...
is the love of life.

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  • Palas Kumar Ray
    November 25
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    Very true statement of very needful satisfaction in a c lose relationship.


  • spiritraven
    November 15

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    Absolutely awesome

    I love this work. Thank you so much for entering my contest.


  • Debbydoes
    November 3
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    hmm hmm hmmm, very seductive piece!

  • WithoutWings
    October 22

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    Very nice, I feel the passion roiling from both you and your words. The lines about the honeydew are beautiful imagery, and the sky being the vibrant color of indecency is a very powerful image. A very good poem. Thank you for writing it.


  • midnight51
    October 22

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    Seductively sensual. I loved the bit about honey dew and keep it kinky and slinky ... like my lingerie.

    Nice
    Josh


  • John BoSox
    October 14

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    I needed to read this in the shower..lol...This was well written and done in a tastefull manner..so sensual..revealing..touching...You nailed it.Great write, to be sure..Good luck. You may not need it

    John


  • Happy3
    October 14

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    impassioned and erotic
    makes one full of pleasure

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