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Illusion

The sleepy mask,
opened it’s hollow eyes.
The lone scarecrow,
bared its broken fangs.
Awakened.
Threatened.

The mermaid screams,
as I burn her tail.
I won’t weep,
if you leave again.
Pained.
Abandoned.

The thirteenth nightmare,
will steal your soul.
So when I wake up,
I am hollow.
Emptied.
Stolen.

The stars withered,
when I plundered the moon.
Open the skies,
I want to fly.
Cruel.
Evaded.

The night ended with screaming,
I cursed and prayed in confusion.
My world ceases to exist.
Illusion.

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  • Rend the Veil gold member
    October 18

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    Truly a beautifully Mastered Piece,

    love the soft flow and thoughts penned

    here, but felt the sadness too, well done !

    Love & Blessings

    ~Rend


  • A m b r e a
    October 14

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    Wow this was a little scary! The flow was beautiful, as well as the metaphors! Thank you so much for entering my contest and good luck!