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Bloody Sin

Violate, Humiliate...
You're invited; Come in!
Cut me deep; write your name
in my blood. I'm your slave!
My lust, your touch...
I lay here for you; My bloody sin!

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  • sgking123
    October 24

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    wow

    this was intense if slave did ot have sexual overtones...if not slave meant eminine humility at its best when it is so weakened by the passion of deep love. i felt it...this was amazing.liked it.thanks for entering


  • Sweet-Sins
    October 16
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    wow this is good!!
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