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the first shot

set the barrel, level the ground
cock the bolt, load the round
calm your nerves, steady your hand
take a breath, take command
check the wind, adjust the scope
pray to god, bank on hope
find a target, say good by
pull the trigger, let it fly

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  • Ira
    October 16
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    I like it. Keep up the good work you...