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Suicide

Everyday I wish I could die
nothing but hurt and pain
I let out a silent cry
aching, affecting my insides
blood flowing at my bed side
letting the blood flow as I ask myself why
Lookin around the room getting blurry eyed
Just 5 more seconds I'll be up in the sky
total darkness begins to take over my eyes
I hope I don't survive
let me be in peace in the deep blue sky
Today is the day I commit suicide.




I'm just going through so much right now. Just let me know what you think

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  • Warrior of Peace
    October 14

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    woa

    IT very deep and dark. But there's beauty in the dark too. You express it so well. I hope things turn around for you. You're never fully alone. There light beyond the darkness.

  • EdgeWysE
    October 14
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    Very vivid

    Obviously something you've thought a lot about. Keep pushing on, there's always light at the end even if you can't see it.