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Today



(I died today)
I don't know why.
(I died today)
I was only 10.
(I died today)
I didn't die a peaceful death.
(I died today)
I died in a car wreck.
(I died today)
I wish I was still alive
(I died today)
Or at least could have said goodbye
(I died today)
I miss my mom and dad
(I died today)
I miss all of my friends too.
(I died today)
My goals are gone and my dreams are shattered.
(I died today)
Tell everyone that I miss them and goodbye.
I died today, because you chose to drink and drive.

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Written April 10th, 2004

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  • July 10, 2004
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    Powerful statement, and great message, but so sad. Good work, keep it up.
    Prysmatyk