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[ For all the things that happend ]

For all the things that happend
And everything I done and now regret
Saying I feel shame for
But for all that happened in replace
Now covers up the shame with worse
Regrets that I can't seem to forget
The past hold it over me like I light
Shining down on my life
Showing mistakes
Hideless shame
Can't deny it when I know it was
Can't accept it to make it not
Ignore it Ignore it
Even thuogh it was
Ignore it Ignore it
And it never was

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  • Rejected Easter Egg
    October 14

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    Well done. The only thing I suggest is a little work on your structure. I'm a fan of balanced lines usually