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body language 101

you could feel my insides wanting more
my outsides pulling onto something to grip
as your pressure twirling inside me
making me all fluster and fast.
as you get deeper inside me
getting into that spot
my gasps getting faster, louder
while I'm biting at your ear.
for a spilt second are eyes meet,
while you hold into me
you kiss my neck
then my lips.
you whisper

"i love you"

while i then collapse

in your arms.
head first, laying

on your chest,

my arms

wrapping

around your shoulders,

my fingers tracing

your back.

and my heart blending into your heart center.

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love...and the physical side to it.

Any advice would be lovely?

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  • Mozarts funeral gold member
    October 29
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    Well just in case you think he forgot...remind him...remind him that death will be extremely painful...

  • Mozarts funeral gold member
    October 22

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    You're too little to be physically in love with anyone!!! Ha ha ha sorry that's the sisterly/motherly side coming out. But from the poetic side it is a really well penned piece. Just...be smart and safe :-) and that goes without saying because you're the awesome bloved!


    • bloved
      October 29

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      awwwww that's sweet, I'm also not that small! I'm a college girl now.

      And yes I'm being smart and safe


      • Mozarts funeral gold member
        October 29
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        You ARE little and if any boy hurts you or breaks your heart I'm coming after them! :-)


        • bloved
          October 29
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          aw thanks, i need that support, but the guy I'm with is amazing. but yeah he knows whats coming if he does


  • lucian silver member
    October 14
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    O.O

    Nice poem, lil sister.

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