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Lost

I am wandering
Twisting and turning
Through the pathways
Of my life
Its all so confusing
I cant quiet comprehend
What your throwing at me

I am walking through the night
Fog swirls around me
I cant see anything
I am disappearing
Falling away to blackness
Slipping away
Losing my light

What’s going on?
I don’t know
Where am I?
Going and out
Through whatever

I am lost
Fallen
Where am I?
Don’t quiet know
Cant you see
I don’t know

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