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Silent Waters

Submerged in body of water,
vision blurred by the vast image of ocean.

Emotionless I drift while,
arms sway as tide approaches.

Breath peacefully leaves body,
fear begins to dissapate.

Tranquil darkness consumes as
I gracefully descend into depth.

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For dah contest.

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  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    October 18

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    i could feel myself drifting away with this as well... amazing.

    thanks for entering the contest and best of luck.

    love,
    becca