Two hearts entangled in such an adventure,
No one knows where it will go...
Friendship set ablaze,
Life is at its finest...
Hands intertwined,
Breaths taken away,
Your beauty mesmerizing...
Alone,
Is what you never are...
Close your eyes when that feeling hits you,
And relax,
Imagine my soft touch;
My gentleness...
Imagine the smile that plays across my face,
As I dance with you in my arms...
When that feeling hits you,
Always remember,
Look between the soles of your fingers,
And even though I am no where near,
Mine are still laced with yours...
So come share a dance with me,
Let life take its path...
Leave those moments of heartbreak behind,
And lets bathe in the feelings of today.
Your words make me feel weak,
But stronger then I'v ever been...
Letting my wall crumble in your hands,
Bringing words to my lips id never tell another soul...
My fears are far behind me,
And I have you to thank...
When I think of you,
My day seems quiet possible..
I feel,
Unbeatable..
Full of Life...
When I think of you,
I feel more like me..
And I know that when I am around you,
I will be who I am,
And that smile will play across your face,
And melt away my heart...
Thank You...
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Absolutely amazing.
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This was a really, really good poem babe. And I'm glad that you've found potential in another person again =)
Although, I will admit that when I read this :
"Look between the soles of your fingers,
And even though I am no where near,
Mine are still laced with yours..."
And saw how closely related it was to what I used to say to you .. It kinda hurt =( -
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it is definetly closely related to waht you used to say to me, but its because this is for you. I was really thinking about you the other day.. idk why.. and i felt like writing.. and i came up with this... -
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Really ??
Wow .... I'm kind of speechless here .. lol.
Thank you Zack . It means a lot =)
I miss you <33 We need to get our butts in gear and start talking like we used to =P
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We really do love, id like that quiet alot =-]
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Cute, and enjoyable. Most love poems bore me fast, but your's was good. I like
"Leave those moments of heartbreak behind,
And lets bathe in the feelings of today."
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