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crack

your self-control is running out
your hands are wandering, ouch
your eyes are moving, here's my face
clock hands moving like a race

you say you will never lose control
that's like saying i'm normal
its completely untrue
this tingling is nothing new

i make a bet, your going to CRACK
you say you'll never CRACK
throw a rock, the windows CRACK
this is a smile that will not CRACK

on the bus after school
i see you struggle to keep your cool
i feel your hand brush my back
i yell "ha-ha your going to CRACK"

you smile and it's pained with want
i laugh and start to daunt
i take your hand and put it HERE
you whip it back, i'm sorry dear

i make a bet, your going to CRACK
you say you'll never CRACK
throw a rock, the windows CRACK
this is a smile that will not CRACK

haha will he crack?

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  • Jalmeida
    October 15
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    I like this allot ! It all flows very well.