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no fear



 We seek to find the answers behind.
Whats the meaning of life and being.
And why are we here, full of unknown fear
Now this is just a suggestion
for the answer to all our questions
If we would just stop and listen
There would be no missing
and you would find there is no fear
because Jesus holds you near....

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  • SteveandSon gold member
    October 14

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    I would appreciate being your AP brother. You did a very nice christian poem and I love it. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.
    My favorite part is:
    If we would just stop and listen
    There would be no missing
    and you would find there is no fear
    because Jesus holds you near....

    Thank you so much,
    Steve


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 13

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    Love the message you have here.
    and the way you penned the meaning
    and most of all because Jesus holds you dear
    many hugs Angel♥

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