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Killing Tree.

Climbing up my killing tree.
To cut the ropes and set you free.
Dead eyes stare back at me.
Punished for my Apathy.
Climbing now back to the ground.
Seemingly def devoid of sound.
Except the cries growing loud.
For the torment i have found.
Shovel now pierce the dirt.
Removing soil and the hurt.
Muscle ache feeling burnt.
This new lesson I have learnt.
Lifeless body dropped inside.
Knowing now just why you died.
My emotions I couldn't hide.
I knew the truth and you had lied.


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