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outside looking in

  
So, Here I am
On the outside looking in.
Not sure where I'm going,
or even where I've been
so
I walk this lonely road
in search of where to begin
To try and find the answers
for the questions I have within

knowing someday that I'll see
The other side of me.

From the outside looking in....

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RockSteady

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  • H.f.s
    October 17

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    WOW!! that was short but meaningful and hitting the point...a subject everyone can relalte to ...thanxx for entering and good luck


  • sweet arrival gold member
    October 14

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    there is a side of each of us that we share with certain people... those are the ones who get to see it all, good and bad. i am honest, but don't share everything unless i feel a trust, and then i take that chance. i like this. the whole thought of looking in at ourselves from an outer perspective can hopefully help us to see ourselves as we would want to be seen, and make that person who we really are.


    • RockSteady
      October 24
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      glad you like, looking in from the out side, if done right. can also allow you to see looking out from where your looking in from... thinkin......


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 13

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    Love this dear friend for in the end I am bound to see the other side of me love the message you penned Hugs Angel♥