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Surprise!

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blind date,
I open the door
and discover my ex

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A contest entry

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  • abu nuwas
    November 21
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    Ha!


  • SheWolfNLust silver member
    November 20

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    Omg, I shutter in the thoughts of finding my ex lol, well written and I very much loved your poem xoxo

    • Bruce silver member
      November 20
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      That would be the date from hell!
      Thanks for your sweet comment!


  • Aalta
    November 18

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    haha that was really funny...'
    A sticky situation... did it really happen?

    • Bruce silver member
      November 18
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      Thanks dear Neighbor! No, I just imagined it! I wonder if it ever happened to someone?


  • fallendust
    October 28

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    I am speechless lmao..................this was hilarious and I love how the humor in this one is nestled within just a few words lol

    • Bruce silver member
      October 28
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      Thank you! I love senryu, but good ones are hard to write!


  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    October 20

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    Nightmare on Elm street? No, it would be a nightmare on ANY street! LOL And what a nightmare that would be! Good senryu moment captured here!

    Dennis

    • Bruce silver member
      October 20
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      Hi Dennis! Many thanks! Yes, it would be a nightmare!


  • onesugar gold member
    October 18

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    Hilarious! But what a nightmare. Well it would be for me. I suppose it all depends what you feel for your ex. A good write that when I got to the bottom made me say DAMN! Amongst other things. I liked this, best of luck in the contest. ~sugar~


  • ariazephyrzoe gold member
    October 16

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    this made me smile
    it gives you a lot of thoughts

    a. you're meant to be
    b. it's such a small word
    c. mmmm I like you to provide letter C
    my neurons suddenly stops to function

    I like it


  • Draig aine gold member
    October 15

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    BRAVO

    perfectly you


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 14

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    the wedded bliss of lifes least best when graced upon the steps...what a mess i can confess..and the rest went out with the trash LOl dear brother Hugs always Angel♥

    very profound~~

    • Bruce silver member
      October 15
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      Thanks Hun! And a great comment to accompany it!


  • ScarletO gold member
    October 14

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    Surpise is the perfect title for this one. Well done as usual.


  • TheQueenOfPoetry
    October 14

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    I like the Atlantis Morrisette irony of this. Brilliant and original. You should be a writer.


  • Wandering Woman gold member
    October 14

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    Very good!

    Funny with the visual and wonderful as a short poem. Good look with the contest!


  • sensualbutterfly
    October 14

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    Lol...that would be a nightmare!!! At least for me! lol but great job I love it


  • Cherrylv
    October 14

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    Lmao lmao now would it be a nice surprise or a dreadful one
    Great fun poem Bruce

    Cherry xxxx


  • Ez Writer silver member
    October 14

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    Ahh what a shock it must have been to too !
    No really true friend would do this to you ... Lol ///
    You the man ! Way to go Bruce luv it ...
    Best regards , your twin brother - Easy

    • Bruce silver member
      October 15
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      Thanks dear Brother! And let me tell you, it was a hell of an evening!

      Your demented brother,
      Bruce


  • xxSerendipityxx
    October 14

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    Another great write! As always you put so much emotion into so few words. I love how with this people will be able to view it differently. Is he happy to see his ex or will is he mad? Best of luck in the contest!

    • Bruce silver member
      October 15
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      Thanks, Serendipity! I always love your perceptive comments!


  • PapaDukes42 gold member
    October 13

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    Awesome!!

    Hmm, I can't help but think, is this supposed to be telling you something??

    *smile*

    • Bruce silver member
      October 15
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      Thank you so much for dropping by and commenting!


  • Shantti silver member
    October 13

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    OMG That's some blind date!!! I think that even tops my worst one
    This is amazing. Thank you sooo much for entering! I completely love this

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