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Breaking Down

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I look at you
Seeing the pain behind those eyes
Those beautiful
Gorgeous eyes

Im breaking down
It's killing me so quickly
Never before have I felt this need
This urge

The urge to run from here
Never looking back
Only coming back a couple of times a year

Noone really wants me here
Everyone may love me

But their lives are easier
When I am gone

I was going to go with you
Leave and never look back

But no
They had to break us both down

"Are you fucking happy now?!?!
Have you made us cry enough?!?!
What the fuck is wrong with you!?!?
Go fuck yourselves!!!"

This is what I scream
This is what I cry out

This is how I feel
Broken
Down

Still Breaking
Down

Into spirals

Someone help me please?

Someone make them let her go!!!!!

Someone....

Keep us from breaking
Down
Till we are gone

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  • Marty-McFly
    October 18

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    This is amazing! I loved the way the poetry could just as easily have been prose, and i would have felt its power all the same...

    Someone help me please?

    Someone make them let her go!!!!!

    I wish i could. Excellent write

  • The Devil18
    October 16
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    this is wonderful so full of life and meaning nice job


  • Fallen-Thumper
    October 14

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    this piece is really relatable and really well written, im sorry if you have to go through that, in the end you can find your strengths. A really great write and i loved it. Amazing!
    -penguin-