I miss you.
I miss the way you look at me,
and the way you hold me tight.
I miss the way you sing to me,
and hold me through the night.
I miss the way you whisper,
when you say "It'll be okay".
I miss the way you kiss me,
when I have to walk away.
I miss the way you hug me,
whenever I feel down.
I miss the way you cheer me up,
whenever my face frowns.
I miss the way you were there for me,
because sadly now your gone,
and forever I will always be,
missing all you've done.
I miss you.
what do you think?
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omg! amazeing! I love it and awwwwwwwwwwww. sorry i cant stop saying awww, it's beutiful. Realy, realy good write, well done!
oh, but by the way "I miss the way hug me", i think you've ,missed out a "you" there lovey x
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thankyou
its all good now, changed it
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I really like this, its very emotional
Is this about a certain somebody/something or just a ramdom write?
if its a random write then its really good with the emotion, and if its about someone, then its good anyway
well dones!
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duuude why do you always ask... my poems are like hardly ever about someone... how about from now on, i will write if its about someone so you know?
if i dont write anything its a random write, just like this one
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lol yeah, that would be a great help xD
its just coz a few sound like they could be written about someone......
thats all
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haha ill try remember to do that for you, and duuude, nobodys special enough for my poems to be about them
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I know that feeling well! It is not easy, but remember they are in your heart, so they are never truly gone...
You did a great job on this one!!!
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thankyou
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