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Chips and Sparks of Memories



Draped in the delicate laced patterns of the spiders and fogged by the many generations of breaths that had gazed into its reflecting face, sat the century old mirror.



Its once smooth surface was now filled with overlapping lines of silver edge, just sharp enough to color itself the scarlet paint that it'd often seen from the gazing heirs.



And though it once rested upon a bed of lushful velvet and shined brilliantly along with the warming sun, it no longer could reach any of the eternal life that it once possessed.

 

 

 

For, it had once seen the shimmer of flawless pearls around a fragile neck and the glamor of ruby colored lips that formed puckering shapes each dusk.

 

 

 

But its once bold frame's now coming undone as the ancient layer of golden paint gradually chips and flies into the air, creating a shower of sparks and memories.

 

 

 

Yet, it forever holds that everlasting charm of royalty that graced herself upon it, and no matter the one that stares into her face, she will eternally see the sparkling emerald eyes, the delicate fair skin, and the golden ringlets cascading about her shoulders....

 

 

 

                    ...that once belonged to the sweet maiden who is now her wrinkled but smiling grandmother.

 

 

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  • sgking123 gold member
    November 16
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    intricate

    lacework this of an entiely different kind though..loved it space and above all structure two lines sayinga lotta nd going to next dulex..wow


  • ClosedEyes
    October 14

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    Good luck in the competition! Glad to see another write from you when i came online (: This made me feel so peaceful and calm, especially loved the ending! Your description of.. everything is so indeering and really captivates the reader!
    Another shooooooperrr writeee my lovelyyy (:
    <33


  • smitaanand
    October 14

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    What a lovely write honey and the emtions are cavorting everywhere,also the ending is magnificient really brilliant...


  • rainboots
    October 13

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    Now this was a creative spin on the prompt. It was just lovely. Your words flew off the page and read like a story. The ending was brilliant. Really really really enjoyed where you took this. Great job and thanks for ending.

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