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Lifes Cobblestone Path


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Golden leaves in time

Show embers of powers grace

Set in cobblestone.

Winding my way through the path

I walk through times pathway.









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  • Debra A Baugh gold member
    November 14
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    another journey....yet another token of words spoken.....short and sweet.....nonetheless a path well worth taking.......lP&H


  • Rose Angel gold member
    October 14

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    Your tanka brings back memories when I last wrote mine...An effective write!


  • SteveandSon gold member
    October 14

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    I liked these lines the best:
    Golden leaves in time

    Show embers of powers grace

    Set in cobblestone.

    Good luck in the contest and thank you so much for entering. I will add you as a sister.
    Thank you,
    Steve