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Prototype

So fine
So New
Look at the things, They can do.
Look at the level, I'm left behind.
When I'm just the forerunner
Of their perfected kind.

How I envy them
How I hate them.
How I care for them.
How I love them.

Being the first, isn't easy;
When you are just one big test subject.
With people simply pushing you, to see,
Just how much can you take, before you break.

I'm not the ultimate.
I'm not the end.
I am just a Prototype
With broken bones to mend.

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Some issues with my family, nothing big.

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  • DeathByAnAngel
    October 21
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    wow i love it.. i really do and i know what your getting at.. i miss you sage.. alot :'(