The feel of your hand in mine;
would make me feel so divine,
Your touch upon my skin
please, oh please, won't you begin.
I crave your touch in every way
Touch me, touch me, every day!
A contest entry
- What you desire most by sgking123.
700 points, ended October 28, 48 entries
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All comments are welcome!
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Good style. It sounds like it could be a song.
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well done little flower
it is full of your yearning and
filled with desire. i like it good.
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...and you Nekked!!!!
touching....
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tactile
yes touches can beat full bodies presses any days...they are so sesuous and good to feel that one cares more for them than waht arrives after touches. our inner mos desire is so tender and delicate.welld oen.thanks for entering -
Lovely
A sweet romantic piece that longs for that moment of touch
Delightful poem
Best wishes
Julie
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bravo! short and powerful!
i really liked the write and rhyming was so cool! ^_^
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excellent length! you make me horny! haha just kidding
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it is amazing how the simplest touch can just set a person off sometimes, in a good way, that is, you just gotta love touching, keep it flowing
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A sweet request that you should be honored by your lover. Such an easy request to fullfill and a sweet one to fullfill.
You have paited a wonderful picture with your words, one of love and tenderness building to ..........
Thank you for sharing.
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