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yellow sun or im as yellow as the sun part two.

im as yellow as the sun.
but your not here with me.
your the rays i shine upon the earth.

Im a small white dove.
but your not here with me.
your the bug that got away.

im a single plane in the blue sky.
but your not here with me.
your the shadow i cast upon the earth.

im as yellow as the sun.
Im a small white dove.
im a single plane in the blue sky.
but i got one thing on my mind.
you are always there with me.

your the rays i shine upon the earth.
your the bug that got away.
your the shadow i cast upon the earth.

im as yellow as the sun.
Im a small white dove.
im a single plane in the blue sky.
but i got one thing on my mind.
i am right.
you have always been with me.

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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 15

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    Beautiful

    awe sweetie this is such a wonderfully penned write from you I really love the realistic flow and depth to your piece here and furthermore I really love the words you used to express yoursef in this write. I felt like it has a tune going to it and could be mad einto a song if you got the right singer ect. any ways wonderful job as always sweete and keep up the nice work a salways. gie's <3 always, Dad