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Lover's Comfort

I love to feel the touch of your hand
whenever I can
My heart skips a beat
Oh so sweet!!!!!

Touch to touch
what a spark of love
Our love smolders
it lies in wait
when we grow colder
it warms such an autumn cool day

Just a look from you
only comfirms what
I already know is true

Our love comforts
it eases
making everything worth
it surely pleases
it does assert
it increases everyday
and will never fade

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  • MJ Forgives
    October 13

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    Ahhh it really is sweeet and beautiful. I am so glad to have picked this because of the title. I really loved it. Love and Peace!
    -Jess

  • luv2dream gold member
    October 13
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    you are such a romantic ...this is so beautiful!