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I can fly.

I can fly, fly through the sky,
I can soar like never before.
I can climb mountain,
Touch ever star,
as long as you arnt that far,
I can fly.

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dedicated to my dear, dear friend carol, Happy birthday hun!!!

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  • Tqop
    November 10
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    Very inspiring. I do love this poem. It is very inspiring.


  • stella187
    October 16
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    I can climb a mountain or I can climb mountains.

    Every not ever star.

    As long as you are not that far away.


  • Ativyen Volst
    October 14

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    simple and sweet. Grammatical errors present. But they can be rectified.
    It seemed childish...but I now think its more child-like.