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Who I Am

I am the one that gets lost in our passing glances
I am the one that can’t take her eyes off of you
I am the one that lives to hear your voice
I just want you to know who I am

I am the one that rejoices in your laugh
I am the one that likes how I can still smell your cologne after you’ve left
I am the one that admires your quiet beauty
I just want you to know who I am

I am the one that melts when you reach out to hold my hand
I am the one that the room spins when you kiss me
I am the one that trembles with the slightest of your touches
I just want you to know who I am

I am the one that longs for each embrace
I am the one that the world stops when I hear you say those three words
I am the woman that is completely in love with you
I just want you to know who I am

I am the one that wants to know all of your dreams
I am the one that is crazy for you and will never let you down
I am the one that wants to spend the rest of my life with you
I just want you to know who I am

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  • Dark-Moon-Enid
    October 13

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    I love the repetition in this poem. The fourth paragraph, first and second line has taken a place in my mind and heart, each time I read this it makes a perminant mark in my head and is repeated over and over again. This poem was absolute wonderfully and I definitely love the one emotion that is pouring out into it, the third paragraph, third line makes me quiver with joy as I have felt the same feelings. I could not say one word other than overwhelming to describe this poem, so full of love and devotion. I hope she has read this because it is by far the most amazing poem, it has replaced the other one on being my favourite and you'll always and forever be my favourite poet. Thank you for sharing and add more, I'll always be obliged to comment.


    • Never-Better25
      October 14

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      Thank you for your wonderful words! You are always so kind and uplifting. I really appreciate the time and effort you put into commenting on my writes. I am flattered by your compliments. Thank you for your honesty and your devotion! I am glad that this one speaks to you! That is the ultimate compliment, to have the reader relate to the work as if it is some part of their own story...
      Thanks again!