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Drawn To You

Strolling along the river
Just friends
One half wanting something more
Another half ready to run

So afraid of loving
And so determined,
Love could never last
Yet transformed by an ephinany

 

That suddle fall evening 

When you tried to kiss me

I was drawn to you without hesitation

And I knew you were the one

   

Author notes

2. Show me how you went from being afraid to love, to deeply in love
first poem in 6months

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  • ZeInkslinger
    October 29

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    your emotions and feelings i can sense greatly!
    the only thing i see maybe wrong is
    "Yet transformed by an ephinany"
    i think maybe that is supposed to be epiphany?
    wonderful though =)
    God Bless,
    ZeInkslinger


  • Peace and Love942
    October 23
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    I can relate so well


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    October 15
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    Beautifully penned
    Your emotions and feelings come off clear. This is great.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    October 13

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    This reads with a simple beauty. That can be a very nice thing.

    Thanks for sharing.