when our dreams become reality
when you are safely held in my arms
i will tell you just how i feel
for that moment
when you spin me round
and i giggle loud
but feel safe
that on moment
will be better than heaven
my heart is yours
you are my life
i love you angel
your beauty amazes me
and your smile itself
makes my heart leap
but those three words
make my soul melt
i love you.
Author notes
for my future husband, death fox.
In a list
A contest entry
- Show your love by Sonya-Erasmus.
550 points, ended October 23, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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ahh...i relate to the title...plan to greet my love in the airport in december as long as the snow won't be too deep hope weather won't postpone plans...such a beautiful write!! wish you both the best. love is wonderful!
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thanks ever so much ^_^
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Your Pure Heart makes my breath catch in My Chest
Your Soulful Eyes cause me to Ponder
Existence itself...
How one so Beautiful can Exist so Delicately
and yet Tame a Wild Mans Soul?
I am yours from now Till Death do Us part
but death will have to tear me from you
Just to get me from one Plane to the Next
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-is speechless-
no baby, not til death do us part. we are stronger than death, we will still be together.
yours until the collapse of time, my beautiful love.
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Precious indeed.
That giggly feeling is the best!
It is such a blessing to be able to love someone and also to be able to write about it as we please.
Thanks for your fine entry and best of luck in the contest
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very true ^_^ and the fact that he's not just my ap boyfriend, but soon to be real life husband... it makes it that little bit better ^_^
thanks for the kind words, and the great contest. -
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That makes life worth while
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it does ^^ he just needs to make it out the army alive ^_^
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