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Angel in my window

Sunlight radiates through your translucent wings
Teal ribbons flow within your golden hair
Sparkles of angel dust touch my skin
Awaken my soul with your song~

I feel your presence as your heart sings
Illuminate me with your sunshine
Place a smile inside my heart
Save the edges of my life all day long~

Starlight dances in your eyes
As it twinkles into the sky
Deliver your love upon my soul
Whisper softly messages of hope~

kj 10-09-09

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  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 13
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    excellent~

    Beautiful as always
    Have missed you sweetie...
    Hoping this poem means you are back
    Hope you come to see me too
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


    • Kalexi
      October 14
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      Thank you, Susan. Yes,I'm back,I will come and see you.

      Love,
      Karen