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Set Me Free

{credit of picture given to x-Black-Butterfly-x}

 

Hidden inside this tower,

this place i call my mind

i wonder will you set me free

or if your love is blind.

 

Am i the one you hope for

in times of enternal bliss

Am is your sleeping beaty

you wish to awaken with a  kiss?

 

Could fairy tales come true?

love is for fools you say

well i'm the biggest fool of all

run away with me today

 

Hidden inside this tower,

this place i called my mind

your love has set me free

my heart is yours in time.

 

[Love is never to far if you open up your heart]

 

 

 

 

Author notes

i used the Princess picture.

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  • i love it. it was my thoughts actually when i took the picture and my thoughts for today after some very confusing things last night. you have given that picture the voice that is hidden behind it and I love the fantasy feel of it. we all wish for the fairy tale and we all deserve one. absolutly adore it thank you


  • African king
    October 26
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    thats good

    its good but work harder on your choise of words and rhyme


  • awannabepoet
    October 22
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    Fairy tales are made of the stuff of reality, never you forget that.


  • shukriabdalla
    October 14
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    I really like this one...I think its amazing and really cute


  • lepoeteboheme
    October 13

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    Kels, this poem made me smile and feel a little bit warm & fuzzy. lol I thought the simplicity of the poem leant itself well to the fairy tale theme. Good job, lady friend. ily


  • No More Lies
    October 13

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    Not the usual style of poem I'd read but it's good. Very good. The lines and words flow well together.
    Good work.
    Keep it up.


  • Wrench-X
    October 13

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    This is a very great write and I enjoyed reading it. the fairytale touch to it was a very good idea. Keep writting I enjoyed it

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