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[love found]




If love could lift me to such great height,
should I hold on to imaginary wings
        or would your arms be able to give me
warmth and comfort,
even when we bask in moonlight
instead of sunlight?

Just two souls, beneath a sky of blue,
wingless.




Author notes

Option C:

Inspired by:
Found Love by Malabu in http://allpoetry.com/poem/5791571

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  • Randomly Beautiful
    October 19

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    Lovely penning. Thank you so much for this.


  • Mango Memories gold member
    October 14
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    Softly sweet.


  • Malabu
    October 14

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    id say My arms would keep you uplifted warmly...your heart would thrust us to the stars
    and we could swing from the moon wingless
    till we land on silk white clouds


  • Ken-Maverick
    October 14

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    Ooh, much is said here in so few lines.
    Wonderful

    Ken


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 13

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    excellent

    This is beautiful sweet sis of mine
    Enjoyed the read
    Have been sick but feel better now
    Best of luck in the contest
    I have up 2 new ones drop by when ya can
    Will catch up with ya
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~


  • awannabepoet
    October 13

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    And so it was that a house was built on the air of promises and whims. And love came to reside therein for the heart of an Angel knows nothing of weight and such things.

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