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A Letter of Love

This letter I write I begin with
"I love you"
Though my words are held true,
again I cry hoping that'll not leave.

You hold me in your arms telling me
"It's okay, nothing will happen"
And when you had to leave
It was hard to say goodbye.

Those these words " I'll be back"
Pierce through my head like a knife.
And knowing that separating is what,
makes me know I'm alive.

You will soon return and I'll be there,
not in the basking tears of sadness,
Nothing will break us apart.
And my words I now say to you is.....

I Love You

Author notes

This is talking about the temporay separation of me and my boyfriend who is helping his grandmother out and he is in New Orleans, LA. When he reads this I know he feels the same way. Love you

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  • Gothikitten13
    October 13

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    When learnin the powerful words "I love you" itz hard 2 say if itz true or not. Even if there was a spark it isnt always easy 2 say good-bye not lik it z 2 say Hi. But make sure when u use the words they must MEAN IT but if NoT there z no use of say it. . . . .. . Bt make sure u know wat ur sayin & make sure u choose ur words wisely.