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End Of The Line

Masked marauder hanging round,
cute little bandit up to no good.
Tries hard not to make a sound,
would jump out there if he could.

Grandma has a broom in hand,
and she is shaking it right at me.
This is not at all what I planned,
when I fell out of that oak tree.

Fell on grandma's clothes line,
now I don't know what to do.

She wants to tan this hide of mine,
till it turns black and blue.

Swings the broom, begins to curse,
only thing left for me to do is run.
It really could be so much worse,
she could be holding her shot gun.

 

 

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  • Ez Writer silver member
    November 1

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    Hi Sandy ! A wonderful poem and
    take on the cute picture prompt !!
    A great fun read thank you !
    Have a nice Halloween weekend !
    Best always & hugs , friend Easy


  • Wesley Storer
    October 19

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    Well?

    If she took her broom to him, who took the picture? such a nice picture! This world is so cruel for wild life sometimes. Have you made a jack-0-lantern yet? Happy Halloween! Am I the first to wish it? You are a very attractive woman? Do you have kids? You're not turning into an old maid are you?


    • Sandygram
      October 20
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      Good Morning Wes

      So nice to hear from you. Your comment made me smile. Yes I have children and grandchildren and no not an old maid just enjoying living on my own now. No I haven't carved my pumpkin yet. Been to the pumpkin patch though. Happy Halloween to you too my friend. Thanks for stopping bye. Hugs and Smiles. Take care.

      Bless You, Sandy

  • SoulWhispher
    October 13

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    Bravo, this brings a smile to the reader, great take on the picture, I really enjoyed this, blessings with love John

    • Sandygram
      October 17
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      Good Morning John

      Always a pleasure when I se you drop by. Thank you for the nice comment. Hugs and Smiles.

      Peace and Grace
      Love, Sandy


  • Eric Marsh
    October 13

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    haha nice one.....i wouldn't want to put those jeans on.....wonderful...keep well


    • Sandygram
      October 17
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      Good Morning Eric

      So nice to hear from you. Enjoy your weekend. Hugs and Smiles.

      Sandy ;f


  • Heavenly Angel gold member
    October 13

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    Oh this is just too cute, for sure!
    I love this!
    I wish you the very best in this contest, dear soul; it deserves the very best!!!


    • Sandygram
      October 17
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      Good Morning Sandy

      Thank you for this most lovely comment. Hugs and Smiles.

      You take care. Sandy


  • Stickboy gold member
    October 13

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    very cute and funny poem here, great job on this one. love the pic best of luck in the contest
    Sean


    • Sandygram
      October 17
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      Good Morning Sean

      Thank you for stopping by and reading. You take care. Blessings, Sandy


  • Frogzter gold member
    October 13
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    Lol... this is an excellent and very humorous take on the prompt. I enjoyed it so. THanks for entering and best wishes.

    Frogz~

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