Behind my closed eyes
I hide many lies.
Lies no one ever knew,
Something I cant undo.
It happened when
I first saw you,
You opened my heart,
right from the start.
You came up to me,
your eyes glowing
so bright.
You reached out your hand
and held mine tight.
Right there and then,
I knew it was to good to be
true.
But I went on with it.
I had you in my life
For about 8 Months,
our love kept on growing.
On Auguest 13ths, My life came
to an end.
My hopes and dreams,
gone with a wind.
God took you away from me,
I prayed and Hoped it couldnt be.
My heart broke in two.
Smashed and crumbled
The scares on my wrist,
each have a story.
Of how I struggled
Of how I suffered.
With out you in my
life, I can not breath,
With out you in my
life, there is no me.
Just a lost girl,
Hid in many lies.
My smile so fake,
it comes to a suprise.
To everyone I know,
and love so dearly.
Thanks for all your help.
I know I hurt you, and made you cry
I know it hurt when I said i wanted to die.
Mommy and Daddy,
Im sorry when you found me,
My wrist cut so deep,
blood running while i sleep.
I just want you to know
I love you!
A contest entry
- Search Your Feelings by Lukey.
825 points, ended October 19, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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So intense i can really feel the emotions you placed on this write good luck with the Contest.
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The pain in your words is very intense, and you've obviously experienced a great deal of suffering. Loss of a loved one is never easy, but there will always be those who love you and give you a reason to go on. This was a deeply emotional piece. Best wishes in the contest.
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I loved it. Th soft, subtle emotional charge in this poem is great. I really got into it.
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What emotions you show through your poetry, it is very much a piece worthy of reading.
I hope this is fiction and not your reality.
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wow.. the emotion rings through with every word said. I love the write as a piece and am glad I came across your page.
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