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Can You Hear Them?

She's back on drugs again,
she's a model..

I'm so fed up with everyone around me,
I hate you,
in the dark,
don't spit on me.

Eyes are feeling heavy,
well, if you wanted honesty
believe it or not,
party people
take me down town.

Why can't you begin to understand?

Heaven, a blaze in our eyes,
so she says...

I probably shouldn't say this,
just lay it all down
if we run, if we fall...

What ya been doing,
it's funny how I find myself
always in my thoughts.


Author notes

Title: Hilary Duff - Our Lips Are Sealed

Pink - Save My Life
Kraftwerk - The Model
Five Finger Death Punch - Never Enough
Tidal - In Vein
Good Charlotte - Secrets
Hilary Duff - Haters
Yellowcard - Breathing
My Chemical Romance - I'm Not Okay (I Promise)
Nickleback - Believe It Or Not
Scooter - Endless Summer
Rouge Traders - Watching You
The Last Goodnight - Push Me Away
HIM - Rip Out The Wings Of A Butterfly
Counting Crows - Accidentally In Love
Miley Cyrus - 7 Things
Missy Higgins - Nightminds
The Butterfly Effect - In These Hands
Ashley Simpson - Boyfriend
No Doubt - It's My Life
Porcupine Tree - Start Of Something Beautiful

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  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    October 14
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    This came out well. I think it actually sounds good.

    Thanks for entering and good luck.

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**