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You

You tell me not to leave
But I see the in pain in you when you held onto my sleeve
When I made you cry
It felt like I deserve to die
I know I make you worry
And it pains you inside to hear me say sorry
You tell me you won’t go
But I won’t stay for the show
You mean everything to me
My eyes are covered so I can’t see
Without you my life is meaningless
I should have treated you like my princess
I love you to death
So you’re  the reason I still breath.
I love you Sammy

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this poem is written for my sister

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  • BeachBum1
    November 3
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    great piece you have a special way with sentiments and words! thanku for entering good luck


  • blueyez
    October 16
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    awwww how sweet and I'm so glad to read this wasn't about some girl!


  • appleey
    October 13
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    awesom emo!
    its very good and so touching!!
    well expressed and i am sure its heartfelt!!
    good work bro !! keep it up!