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Don't Turn Away

Don’t look away
don't turn around.
Just look strait ahead
at what you have found.

You will think it’s an illusion
you will not want to believe.
Yet I am here for you
why can you not see?

That I will never let you go
I’m as close to you as I can be.
So why not relax,
and just talk to me?

A friend I'll be
till the very end.
Through thick and thin
to the end.

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    October 20
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    What a very nice and supportive write this is!
    I very much enjoyed reading this!
    Thank you for sharing and good luck to you