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Packing it

When he said he was packing a monster
and I told him to prove it to me
He stood there like one of the chippendales
undoing his zip sexily
Nothing prepared me for what he exposed
and I guess I'll remember that day
When he gave it a stoke
like a really proud bloke
and a head popped out ready to play

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  • Malabu
    October 14

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    lol damn jan jan...
    im afraid to show you mine now
    im still laffin though
    love the write and I think ill go to sleep now
    with a smile
    mally


  • Ms.Daydream
    October 13
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    Hahahaha, that made me laugh! A funny poem for a cute picture! x3


  • Frogzter gold member
    October 13

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    Lol.... he indeed looks ready to play and a tad bit mischievous to boot. Thanks for the wonderful entry Jan. It has been far too long.

    Blessings and best wishes,

    Frogz~