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Sham

Where have I seen it before
  the smile
  that's really just a low strung twitch
    that I want to be a smile
    --or is it you that wants it to be
and I who's hoping
  --I really hope--
      it's not

The glance
  that's really just a raised bow
The timbre
  that's really just a brush of resin on wire
The melody
  that's really just a tune-up
    that I want to be music 
      --or is it you that wants it to be
and I who's hoping

that you won't play
    or draw pictures
    or make poems
that you won't smile
  or talk
  or touch

that it's you that's trying
to write a new language
    because this one is broken


Where have I felt it before
  this
    sham
 
  or is it you that's felt it
  and I who's hoping
  -- I really hope --
    it's not

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