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interlude.

who have you died for?

death speaks of the day some girl or some boy
ran into you with the worst of intentions.

i was sure you knew who they were
but sometimes the refraction of their souls
shows a darker side, so they became foreign and shaded.

but that was alright
i kept to the walls and grew a vineyard in my heart
the wine was what i wept for,
and what i dream of now
is a
god mile away.

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  • Candy Morphine
    October 13

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    hhhehe this is cool.

    but sometimes the refraction of their souls
    show a darker side
    -think that might be 'shows' though.

    the last stanza was exceptional.