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Sisters

We died in those days
With fragrance of flowers and sweat on our skin,
We cried in our beds like ghosts
And tried to escape in ways that never worked

We saved our sister in what we did
According to his silver words

And we prayed
And we prayed
And we prayed

We averted eyes and smiled like we were children,
Holding onto memories that weren’t really ours,
Holding onto dreams that never graced our lives

We grew up when we were born,
Catapulted into adulthood at our first breath
And everyone thereafter

We broke in ways that made us fear him,
That made us fear the world,
We felt ashamed, wrong, dirty,
while he rolled in it like a dog

We were the daughters
We were the haunted
We were the dying

And somehow I never knew you suffered
And you never knew that so did I


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  • thebroninja
    October 21
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    cool :)


  • RomeoKapulet
    October 13

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    Pretty emotional and I'm assuming this is about the story you finally came out and told pertaining to your father.

    I like this one a lot. I know I'll never be able to understand your pain or relate to it at that, but I'm always here and hopefully you can continue to get through it.


  • Lizzie-Moffat
    October 13

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    This is perhaps thebest poem i have ever read in my entire life. Is this about the war (just a guess).

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