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Running With Scissors

whichever zig-zags

              she swings off of poisonous suspicion;   
                    the most wonderful suspect.
                                                               
Underneath iniquitous;

              (she is really just a cruel daydream)
                         
                    the pretty distinction of
                        illuminated power           
                                     
                                             
                              it swallows.   
     

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Prompt: Run

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  • sideways hourglass
    October 17
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    I like your imagery. Interesting. Thanks for entering, I enjoyed this.


  • Mr-Nevers gold member
    October 16

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    If the butcher sold human meat I'd be tempted to buy it.