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Penguin

Everlasting love
special times spent together

growing old with each other
knowing you are my heart
be with me, my love.

Without you in my life,
I would be alone and sad
loving you is what makes me whole.

My Penguin. My one and only.
Take my hand and walk with me
beside you forever I will be.

Never in front, never behind
always beside we will travel this land.

My Penguin, my soul mate.
You gave me new meaning that
special day when you whispered
of the love you felt in your heart.

Always and forever you and I
will be one. Never to part
again, I love you Robert.

My Penguin, My love.







Virginia Gapen
October 12, 2009
11:43 PM

Author notes

I dedicate this poem to the one man in my life that can make me smile with just a look. I can't imagine my life without you in it. You are truly my other half and I love you so much.

You are my penguin!

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 14

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    this was a caring and loving read, and it shows how much the person means to you, i know they would love to see this if they haven't already, this was amazing, keep it flowing


  • tomisb
    October 14

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    I love the image of the Penguin. I don't know as I would of ever thought to use the image of a penguin in such a way, but now it will be pinned to my heart with a whole array of new meanings. You have touched a bit of genius in this poem and showered your love and all the world about with a powerful amount of love.
    Peace & Light,
    Tom B.

    • Midnight Raeven
      October 15

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      It is said that when penguins mate they mate for life, never taking another. In my world, Robert is my Penguin. I have forsaking all others the day he told me that he loved me. From now til the end of time he will be my one and only. My heart, my soul, My Penguin.

      Daddy I am happy to see that you enjoyed my poem as much as you did!



      Your daughter,
      Virginia

      • tomisb
        October 15
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        I got the sense of forever without knowing that bit about penguins. Glad I could bring a little joy into your life.
        Love
        Tom B.


  • Lucian Valcor
    October 13

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    I love you too baby and your my penguin also I dont want to imagine my life without you in it you are my light I love you baby

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