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My little Cat

My little cat is black and white,
he doesn't scratch and he doesn't bite.
He's a long furred kitten, he's very cute,
and he's so small, he could fit in a boot.
His name is panda and he jumps very high,
he loves to eat fish but his favourite food is pie.
He cuddles with to you and loudly pur,
he loves you to pat his long, black and white fur.


LESLEY HUANG
13/10/09

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  • lovergirl1558
    October 13

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    awww how cute!!! my friend has a cat just like that....its name is oreo..


    • Little Lesley
      October 13
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      We called our cat Panda because we are Chinese and it's black and white.


  • hawkeslake gold member
    October 13

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    I liked this a lot. I have 2 cats, long-haired Maine Coon cats, named Sophie and Sam. In your next to the last line, did you mean " He likes to cuddle to you..." ? Otherwise I thought your rhyme and meter were very good, and I enjoyed reading this. Lita