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A Broken Trust

I'd like to go back to this morning when I woke up.
When everything was fine and I could still trust.
My heart shattered to learn of your deceipt.
At that moment I admitted true defeat.
For I am not what you want nor what you need.
I do not hold the "experience" the older woman flaunt.
How am I to go on with the info I now know.
You thought of her while I slept? Now thats truely low.
I know I am not perfect but faithful I have been.
I could not live with myself knowing such a sin.
You may believe your emails are exempt form the "unfaithful" clause.
If this is true than I would like to pause.
Pause and think if this table were to turn.
Really channel that anger, feel that burn.
If you knew it not you I was thinking of,
Would you as well be questioning our love?

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